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Slow Down

Tue Aug 25, 2009, 4:41 PM
This is a poem written by a teenager with Cancer.
She wants to see how many people get her poem.


It is quite the poem. Pass it on.


This poem was written by a terminally ill young girl in a New York Hospital. It was sent by a medical doctor - Make sure to read what is in the closing statement after the poem.




SLOW DANCE



Have you ever
watched kids

On a merry-go-round?

Or listened to
the rain

Slapping on the ground?

Ever followed a
butterfly's erratic flight?

Or gazed at the sun into the fading
night?

You better slow down.

Don't dance so
fast.

Time is short.

The music won't
last.

Do you run through each day

On the
fly?

When you ask How are you?

Do you hear the
reply?

When the day is done

Do you lie in your
bed

With the next hundred chores

Running through
your head?

You'd better slow down

Don't dance so
fast.

Time is short.

The music won't
last.

Ever told your child,

We'll do it
tomorrow?

And in your haste,

Not see
his
sorrow?

Ever lost touch,

Let a good
friendship die

Cause you never had time

To call
and say,'Hi'

You'd better slow down.

Don't dance
so fast.

Time is short.

The music won't
last.

When you run so fast to get somewhere

You
miss half the fun of getting there.

When you worry and hurry
through your day,

It is like an unopened
gift...

Thrown away.

Life is not a
race.

Do take it slower

Hear the
music

Before the song is over.

...
....
.....

Dear All: Please pass this mail on to everyone you know -
or even to those you don't. It is the request of a special girl who will soon leave this world due to cancer.



This young girl has 6 months left
to live, and as her dying wish, she wanted to send a letter telling everyone to
live their life to the fullest, since she never will.

------------

Thank you for giving me this, Autumn. <3 It really made my night. I hope some of you take this to heart - it's one of my greatest philosophy's in life.

  • Mood: Content
  • Listening to: After Midnight Project
  • Reading: Scar Night (again)
  • Playing: Mass Effect
  • Drinking: Tea.

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:iconsemisvetick:
wow, that's amazing...
:iconkaya172008:
I was gonna say..you better have mentioned me.:XD:
I know. As soon as I read it, I fell in love with it and I figured you would love it too. :D
Kyla sent it to me. :)
So, how was the parade and all that jazz? :hug:

--
" That's Mr. Doctor Professor Patrick to you! "
:iconkaya172008:
I was gonna say..you better have mentioned me.:XD:
I know. As soon as I read it, I fell in love with it and I figured you would love it too. :D
Kyla sent it to me. :)
So, how was the parade and all that jazz? :hug:

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" That's Mr. Doctor Professor Patrick to you! "
:iconkaya172008:
OOPS. :)
Didn't mean to send that twice...the computers here are reaaaaallyyyy dumb. :XD:
:heart:

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" That's Mr. Doctor Professor Patrick to you! "
:iconautumnava:
:heart: Thanks.

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"Congruent thoughts lead the mind by a trail of crumbs that last only long enough for the crows to come and devour any hope of sanity."--
:iconautumnava:
XD
Me too.

We skipped the parade because Amy was whining about how hot it was, but no loss there, because it's always sucked anyhow. We went into the pavillion, and I won a lot of stuff, but I was mad because the only reason I did was because practically no one else had submitted anything. No competition at all. -_-

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"Congruent thoughts lead the mind by a trail of crumbs that last only long enough for the crows to come and devour any hope of sanity."--
:iconkaya172008:
:)

She's so lame. lol. Congrats. damn..maybe I should have entered after all..oh well..i still have next year..don't feel bad about it though..take pride in what you accomplished. :D

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" That's Mr. Doctor Professor Patrick to you! "
:iconautumnava:
That is if there is a next year. I heard they might not have it again because of the state cutting fair costs. Really dumb.

Of course I take pride in my accomplishments, but it's not much of an accomplishment when all you had to do was submit your work and then have them attach a ribbon to it. XD It's not really a win when you didn't even compete, you know? But thanks, I know what you mean. Besides, free moneys!

:heart:

--
"Congruent thoughts lead the mind by a trail of crumbs that last only long enough for the crows to come and devour any hope of sanity."--
:iconkaya172008:
There better be. Not like I would win anyway, but still! :D

I knows. Then you're welcome. :XD: Exactly! Speaking of which, how much did Josh and the others make for you? lol :D

<3

--
" That's Mr. Doctor Professor Patrick to you! "

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